Decisions. Decisions.

Posted: January 12th, 2011 | Author: | Filed under: Me | Tags: ,

Was just going through some PR texts and stumbled on:

We will continue to attract users, maintain a fresh and “edgy” design and react to technical and business stresses as the user base improves.

Was thinking about editing it into:

We will continue to attract users, maintain a fresh and “edgy” design and react to technical and business stresses as the user base improves. We read that in a book.

Which is better?

Hint: one is partially true

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